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Train Encounter(Chap-10)

Train Encounter
Chapter-10
Epilogue


"Truth is stranger than fiction"
I've heard this many a times from many of my friends, but never got a chance to verify it.
This July (I mean july2006) when I was on my way back to my college in Nagpur, I was struck for 6 hours at Tatanagar station, I didn't have the slightest idea that I'll get to face one of my life's most interesting moments.

Yes, dear reader!! What you just got through last 9 chapters actually happened to be my fellow co-passenger!!
I came to know about her problems when I had started chatting with her when I knew that she too was going in the same train.
She didn't want to tell this "weird" incident to me at first, thinking that I won't believe her, but then told at last.

I was awestruck when she told me that the person was going to meet her that very day!!
Well anyone can guess what amazement did I pass when the person turned out to be her Boyfriend!!
I just asked them if I could write about their incident. They agreed and so here I am!!

No Doubt I have modified a lot on the story part. I think as a writer I have that right. But if, dear reader, you are the person concerned here (I mean Shalini or Arun in real life) Then please let me know how much justice I have done to your story.
And dear reader, if don't have any idea who Shalini & Arun are in real life, then just let me know how much I have done justice in Story Writing...
Arka
getarc@gmail.com

Comments

Ice.Fire said…
Oh My God!!!! Perfect ending in many ways... You had suspence and it was a really good read.. I cant believe its a true story!! As a writer I think you have done very good. In no time you will have a book published. And when you do I want a autographed book for myself...LoL
Well done sweetheart.

Now tell me this.........

When are you going to post a new story... coz I want to read another one.

oh by the way, like before I read your comment and replied on my blog.

tke cre..
3:41 AM
Anonymous said…
The story(Train encounter) is very interesting. The accumulating suspense keeps the reader on tenterhooks. The ending was awaited with abated breath, and it does not disappoint the reader.
A few spelling mistakes may be overlooked in a hastily written blog story,but `come down' for `calm down' (in ch. 9) should not have happened
10:41 AM
Anonymous said…
IT WAS REALLY A VERY SWEET STORY.
TRULY SPEAKING , AFTER GOING THROUGH 1ST 2 CHAPERS I UNDERSTOOD THAT IT WAS RELATED TO A TRUE STORY.
BUT THE WAY U PUT EVERY MINUTE EMOTION AT RIGHT TIME IN D RIGHT PLACE IS VERY APPRECIABLE.
5:53 AM
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